Revising the First Draft

Revising my first draft is harder than I thought it was going to be. I am still wondering if I need graphs or figures to explain certain points in my paper more thoroughly. I found a good picture on orbital sinus venipuncture. This is the technique I will be using to collect blood. I want to ask Dr. Drushel and Dr. Hauck whether or not a picture like the one I found will be worth putting in my proposal. I don't want to add too much more to my proposal in fear that I'll stray away from the conciseness I was trying to get at initially.I feel as though I need more meeting time with my advisors and hopefully that will workout tomorrow.

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